Wow!! What an awesome experience to have participated in CMAP's CodeCamp.
I have started the process of going from having a wealth of opinion and a lack of experience, to a more balanced mix. I have made a mental note of a myriad of things that need to be improved, and will continue to improve the talk and gain more experience every time I do it.
Thanks to the audience for being so patient with me and not have walked out on me. The slides are here.